07-02-2013, 11:04 PM
I really like how much you're putting into the forum, feels like more and more people making this place more awesome. I did my best to try and paint over your sculpt.
![[Image: anatcrit_zps078f3b74.jpg]](http://i1046.photobucket.com/albums/b461/ImSkeptical/Art/anatcrit_zps078f3b74.jpg)
I felt like you were getting abit lumpy, not emphasizing the flow of origin and insertion. Especially near that armpit area, or it can start looking kinda weird. Not sure how defined you were going for, but its usually still a good idea to keep the rhythms as striations, being easier to smooth out information than put it back in.
Your stuff is awesome, your drawing is way better than mine :(. Keep up all the work your doing, and effort your putting in to helping everyone round here :D.
![[Image: anatcrit_zps078f3b74.jpg]](http://s1046.photobucket.com/user/ImSkeptical/media/Art/anatcrit_zps078f3b74.jpg.html)
I felt like you were getting abit lumpy, not emphasizing the flow of origin and insertion. Especially near that armpit area, or it can start looking kinda weird. Not sure how defined you were going for, but its usually still a good idea to keep the rhythms as striations, being easier to smooth out information than put it back in.
Your stuff is awesome, your drawing is way better than mine :(. Keep up all the work your doing, and effort your putting in to helping everyone round here :D.