01-31-2012, 04:22 AM
#9 is quite interesting but it doesn't include a background. I think it would be quite nice if you shrunk it down a bit so chihiro and haku are at the bridge in the foreground, with haku's dragon body/tail trailing into the background, which is the big Bath house :)
You kind of did that with #10 but you put the horizon line in the middle, (it would look got on the bottom 6th or quarter) and you lost the lovely spiraling of haku's body that you have in #9 and #11
You kind of did that with #10 but you put the horizon line in the middle, (it would look got on the bottom 6th or quarter) and you lost the lovely spiraling of haku's body that you have in #9 and #11