Sharpened Pencils And The Demons of Procrastination

[Tatar88]

I will be Talking about the Jaimie jones dragon study

1.the value of background on the left could be redone it to dark
2.the light on the wing
3.the tail is to fat
4.you didnt put any highlight on the tail
5.did you change the dragon head position for fun or challenge ?Because it not the same

tips try to do visual measurement if you dont know that i mean google it .I see that you have probleme getting some angle right this kind of problem will bring also bad proportion.

thanks for that! I was to lazy to do proper measuring. That study was more about the painterly feel I never achieved earlier. thus the head design change. it was a concious choice to change it to see if I can do something else and still remain in that painterly level of detail.
Thanks for the crit! I will continue to work

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this sketchbook deserves more love. the values in your pencil work are great and the studies are solid too. definitely apply those studies into your next pieces and more imaginative stuff!

Thanks - I will!