07-19-2018, 12:14 PM
darkiste, Chubby cat, coinhero, Irish:
Yesh yes, i took in pretty much all of your critiques into account. I removed the pillar completely, fixed the hand with the sword, increased the length of the other arm, totally redid the tits, i think they look alot better, much heavier and fit better into the pectoralis. Spent some time refining the background, added some stylized ribbons to the hair, added some line weight, redid the shield angle, and added some line weight :O as well as refined the forms, and added details and jewelry. Tomorrow i'll start adding color, which shouldnt be too complicated, hopefully since i have the values in place.
Really appreciate all the feedback, it really helps spot stuff i dont notice right away, i freaking sweat while painting this im so nervous for some reason, but i shouldnt be its a digital piece and i dont even have a deadline lol.
Yesh yes, i took in pretty much all of your critiques into account. I removed the pillar completely, fixed the hand with the sword, increased the length of the other arm, totally redid the tits, i think they look alot better, much heavier and fit better into the pectoralis. Spent some time refining the background, added some stylized ribbons to the hair, added some line weight, redid the shield angle, and added some line weight :O as well as refined the forms, and added details and jewelry. Tomorrow i'll start adding color, which shouldnt be too complicated, hopefully since i have the values in place.
Really appreciate all the feedback, it really helps spot stuff i dont notice right away, i freaking sweat while painting this im so nervous for some reason, but i shouldnt be its a digital piece and i dont even have a deadline lol.
70+Page Koala Sketchbook: http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-3465.html SB
Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]
Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]