02-05-2012, 11:35 PM
I love Your comps! You have a very good understanding of space and values. In my opinion You made the last version worse though.
My piece of advice: Keep the backgroud dark. Focus the light on the girl and this creatures belly, so it would instantly pop out the focal point. Move the girl a little bit to the right so that her body balance were exactly in the middle of illustration. Adjust the contrast a little bit. Try to stay in warmer colors within the focal point area and move gradually towards cooler tones as the picture is closer to the frame.
Good luck in the contest!
My piece of advice: Keep the backgroud dark. Focus the light on the girl and this creatures belly, so it would instantly pop out the focal point. Move the girl a little bit to the right so that her body balance were exactly in the middle of illustration. Adjust the contrast a little bit. Try to stay in warmer colors within the focal point area and move gradually towards cooler tones as the picture is closer to the frame.
Good luck in the contest!