05-10-2015, 11:45 PM
Really great stuff you got going here. It's awesome that you take most of your stuff to finish. I wish I had that too. I do see some things that can be improved upon.
Firstly the chicken warrior piece, it has some issues regarding clothing. The cape of the chicken guy & the sleeve of the white wolf (is it? I'm sorry if it's something else) is not feeling right. Cloths wrinkle from tension points. The wrinkles in the mentioned clothings don't make much sense. Also take into account the quality of the clothing. A cotton shirt, a jeans trouser & a suit will all wrinkle in different way. Also the hand of the chicken guy is a little big. I'm not so sure b/c I don't know if you intend the face to be human sized or not. If it is human sized then the hands are bigger than they should be. The mood & atmospheric depth is really nice. I really like the idea of having goofy anthropomorphic characters but they're badass warriors, it's a fun contrast.
On your post #131, the 1st character design suffers from having a similar contrast background & having too many colors on them too. & the hands are a little bit bigger again & arms are too long. Great job on the pose & facial expression. Really bring out the character. Pay closer attention to legs they look a little wonky, relax one leg. The 2nd character design also suffers from wonky legs. Can't tell which one has the weight, & they're too straight. & hands are big too. Again great job on the posing & characters.
On your post #132, the 1st character design (the one in green dress) has the big hand problem going on again. Also lose contrast in the bg for more pop on the guy.
Post #134, the third image, has issue with clothing again. the cape & cloth on the waist doesn't seem believable. Specifically the cloth on the waist won't work that way in that situation.
The character design on post #137 has the big hand problem going on. I think the head size fine though.
Also looking at some of the latest post, your understanding of facial planes isn't sound. I suggest you do some more studies of the planes. Also put focus on keeping your colors clean. They're getting muddy sometimes.
As for fixing the clothing issue, I suggest some life studies, really easy to set up & do one. Also do some from photos. take a lot superhero drawings by the likes of Adam Hughes, Marko Djurdjevic, Bryan Hitch, Leinel Yu etc for stuff like flowing capes.
Resolving the hand issue is a simple matter of being aware of it, & if in confusion hold you hand in a similar position near your face.
I'm afraid that I might be a little late to say these things, but hopefully you can get something out of them. Again I msut say awesome stuff, keep going. DON"T STOP POSTING :)
Firstly the chicken warrior piece, it has some issues regarding clothing. The cape of the chicken guy & the sleeve of the white wolf (is it? I'm sorry if it's something else) is not feeling right. Cloths wrinkle from tension points. The wrinkles in the mentioned clothings don't make much sense. Also take into account the quality of the clothing. A cotton shirt, a jeans trouser & a suit will all wrinkle in different way. Also the hand of the chicken guy is a little big. I'm not so sure b/c I don't know if you intend the face to be human sized or not. If it is human sized then the hands are bigger than they should be. The mood & atmospheric depth is really nice. I really like the idea of having goofy anthropomorphic characters but they're badass warriors, it's a fun contrast.
On your post #131, the 1st character design suffers from having a similar contrast background & having too many colors on them too. & the hands are a little bit bigger again & arms are too long. Great job on the pose & facial expression. Really bring out the character. Pay closer attention to legs they look a little wonky, relax one leg. The 2nd character design also suffers from wonky legs. Can't tell which one has the weight, & they're too straight. & hands are big too. Again great job on the posing & characters.
On your post #132, the 1st character design (the one in green dress) has the big hand problem going on again. Also lose contrast in the bg for more pop on the guy.
Post #134, the third image, has issue with clothing again. the cape & cloth on the waist doesn't seem believable. Specifically the cloth on the waist won't work that way in that situation.
The character design on post #137 has the big hand problem going on. I think the head size fine though.
Also looking at some of the latest post, your understanding of facial planes isn't sound. I suggest you do some more studies of the planes. Also put focus on keeping your colors clean. They're getting muddy sometimes.
As for fixing the clothing issue, I suggest some life studies, really easy to set up & do one. Also do some from photos. take a lot superhero drawings by the likes of Adam Hughes, Marko Djurdjevic, Bryan Hitch, Leinel Yu etc for stuff like flowing capes.
Resolving the hand issue is a simple matter of being aware of it, & if in confusion hold you hand in a similar position near your face.
I'm afraid that I might be a little late to say these things, but hopefully you can get something out of them. Again I msut say awesome stuff, keep going. DON"T STOP POSTING :)