Desirulz's Sketchbook Crituqe/Advice Wanted

[desirulz123]

@VoodooMama Thanks I took the advice of the other posters about gestures and I have been improving ever since! I need to figure out light and form, most of the time I work on drawing these days trying to take my time with it. When working I forget about good brush strokes, need to figure out painting again. Thanks again for the advice, time to work :D