09-27-2013, 07:53 AM
Try toning your background maybe something to indicate environment. The white on white on white is a little harsh on the eyes. I agree the weapon choice is a little strange, having two spears is pretty useless as you lose a lot of control and maneuverability with both, and how is he holding them with what looks like a shield on his back? You have two spots of decaying armor, why does the rest look so clean and new? Understandably the style is a little limiting in that regard but you could still push it. The design is getting there you just need to keep thinking out the details.