10-08-2013, 08:08 PM
in my opinion, to staff! old lady needs a walking stick dont she? her right leg is confusing me though, the support doesnt seem to be there as it fades off. I dunno, even as a decrepit hag (no offence to her) she seems to be off balance and about to slump backwards. just giving us more of an idea where it goes would be nice ;)
point which I think may actually help it a lot is if you toned down the highlights on her wing and leg near the bottom. These pull too much focus away from the face, and as im sure you know you want a gradient going from darks and less saturated to contrasted and bright up top where the face is.
i prefer the hand on the picture on our left, its more confrontational, like she is about to do something. Also two free hands like on the right looks a bit like shes saying 'come at me bro'... maybe thats just me!
out of interest what is that line going into her on the right about? looks like she is getting shot? heh.
Anyways, its looking bang tidy mate, keep at it, cant wait to see how this turns out.
point which I think may actually help it a lot is if you toned down the highlights on her wing and leg near the bottom. These pull too much focus away from the face, and as im sure you know you want a gradient going from darks and less saturated to contrasted and bright up top where the face is.
i prefer the hand on the picture on our left, its more confrontational, like she is about to do something. Also two free hands like on the right looks a bit like shes saying 'come at me bro'... maybe thats just me!
out of interest what is that line going into her on the right about? looks like she is getting shot? heh.
Anyways, its looking bang tidy mate, keep at it, cant wait to see how this turns out.