10-12-2013, 06:01 PM
Ok you're not at the render stage yet. I can't tell what the entire image is going to be doing, so I'd say put everthing that you intend to be in the final in there before you render.
I like the foreshortening of the hips and legs, but the top half of the pose is odd. I'm not sure what she's doing. The torso proportion seems a bit small, and she doesn't have much of a neck. The dynamism of her lower half is at odds with the static top bit. Her expression doesn't really help me to imagine what action that is either.
Maybe some explanation of what you are going for will help us?
I like the foreshortening of the hips and legs, but the top half of the pose is odd. I'm not sure what she's doing. The torso proportion seems a bit small, and she doesn't have much of a neck. The dynamism of her lower half is at odds with the static top bit. Her expression doesn't really help me to imagine what action that is either.
Maybe some explanation of what you are going for will help us?