Vito's Sketchbook

[VitoRafiie]

Hey. Great sketchbook. I really like the 2d animation from the previous page. Was it just trying out stuff or is it part of some bigger project?

The last concept has nice mood and solid proportions. It looks though like you were guessing a lot with how the clothing folds would look. On some parts they look decent and on others (like on trowsers) they go in all possible directions. It's not a huge flaw but something you could improve a bit next time.

Keep going, man :).

Thanks for the critique, you're right, I was guessing too much with the folds! I'll do better next time :)
The 2D animation was something for a really small freelance job:)

Here are two 30minute studies: