Crimson Crusade / Mentoring Program
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@Hypnagogic_Haze: great work man, I really apreciate that you tried to make the extra work :D remeber you guys aren't doing it for me you're doing it for yourselves.
allright, the samus sketches are great, you just need to spend a bit more time understanding the shapes and you should dabble more in the construction phase instead of making details.

Another problem is the way you make your lines in the drawing, I'll teach you guys in depth in the next lesson about that.

Thing is, I will show you one way of drawing lines, and after you draw a lot (read A LOT !!!!) you'll be able to make your own style of lines. Till then having a clean and clear line will help you much more than a personalized one.

The same rules apply to the rockso sketches. Thing is you drew him perfectly, but for the animated style the cartoons are. See there the way the characters move is restricted by the program it in which it's animated. There's a very crude form of perspective in Deathklock and so it's not a great place to take reference from. But you managed to make it in that style and that's great :D kudos bro. But on the full body color render of rockso you kind of exagerated with the colors and the cocaine mountains in the background could have been a bit more detailed XD


Back to the subject: Good work dude, can't wait to see more from you. And touche with Rockso XD god damn I hate him.

And one last thing, man. I may make some rude comments while correcting the drawings, but I'm in no way mocking you. It's just there to encourage you, not to offend (yes yes i'm a asshole XD, bear with me)
















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Crimson Crusade / Mentoring Program - by Tul - 12-16-2013, 06:52 PM
RE: Crimson Crusade / Mentoring Program - by Tul - 12-25-2013, 10:56 PM
RE: Crimson Crusade / Mentoring Program - by Tul - 12-28-2013, 09:24 PM
RE: Crimson Crusade / Mentoring Program - by Tul - 01-06-2014, 08:16 PM
RE: Crimson Crusade / Mentoring Program - by Tul - 01-14-2014, 01:28 AM
RE: Crimson Crusade / Mentoring Program - by Tul - 01-17-2014, 02:07 AM
RE: Crimson Crusade / Mentoring Program - by Tul - 01-17-2014, 11:17 PM
RE: Crimson Crusade / Mentoring Program - by Tul - 01-25-2014, 11:45 PM
RE: Crimson Crusade / Mentoring Program - by Tul - 01-26-2014, 05:30 AM
RE: Crimson Crusade / Mentoring Program - by Tul - 01-30-2014, 08:16 PM
RE: Crimson Crusade / Mentoring Program - by FruitoftheLoomis - 02-06-2014, 03:19 PM
RE: Crimson Crusade / Mentoring Program - by Tul - 02-07-2014, 09:28 PM
RE: Crimson Crusade / Mentoring Program - by Tul - 04-06-2014, 03:38 AM
RE: Crimson Crusade / Mentoring Program - by Milodus - 04-25-2014, 06:14 AM
RE: Crimson Crusade / Mentoring Program - by Tul - 04-28-2014, 03:17 AM
RE: Crimson Crusade / Mentoring Program - by red - 09-23-2014, 02:58 AM

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