08-04-2014, 05:33 AM
Sweet man, sweet. I really like the stuff as always. I really think you're getting better every day, but to be honest I liked the elf one better. So you're portuguese? Just curious hehe, I myself am from Spain, but I'm currently at Panama so yeah :P
I have just a couple crits to add to Lyraina, although they come late cause at this stage reworking what I'm gonna say is a pain.
Basically the left hand seems a bit to big compared to the rest of the body, and the face structure is a bit awkward ( still way better than any of my faces lol) I think it's basically the curve of the nose and the overlaping of the brow and the eye ( her left side overlaps while the right one doesn't at all yet the eyebrows seem to have the same inclination). and a really minor thing:the scarf is too hard edged andyou forgot to color the left shoulder spike that points to the boob ( one is dark grey and the other one is reddish).
Overall, nice stuff man :D
Still, it's nit
I have just a couple crits to add to Lyraina, although they come late cause at this stage reworking what I'm gonna say is a pain.
Basically the left hand seems a bit to big compared to the rest of the body, and the face structure is a bit awkward ( still way better than any of my faces lol) I think it's basically the curve of the nose and the overlaping of the brow and the eye ( her left side overlaps while the right one doesn't at all yet the eyebrows seem to have the same inclination). and a really minor thing:the scarf is too hard edged andyou forgot to color the left shoulder spike that points to the boob ( one is dark grey and the other one is reddish).
Overall, nice stuff man :D
Still, it's nit