11-24-2014, 09:22 PM
Looks great, rafa! I particularly like the coloured shadow on his skin and the fading of the colours, the emphasized outline gives a really cool look as well!
I also already love the little colour sketch you did, only thing that irritates me a bit though is the bright spot of the bottle (don't know if there's a special name for it XD ), because I feel that it kind of draws my attention away from his face, also it's almost right in the center of the image. Maybe it's only my impression though, or you want to have focus on it, then feel free to ignore it! (Also, I understand, the bottle's colour is not so dark in value so it probably would pop out a bit, but wouldn't it be a bit darker? The way it is now it seems a bit glowing to me...maybe I'm all wrong though, because I don't know a lot about lightning or value to be honest orz )
I also already love the little colour sketch you did, only thing that irritates me a bit though is the bright spot of the bottle (don't know if there's a special name for it XD ), because I feel that it kind of draws my attention away from his face, also it's almost right in the center of the image. Maybe it's only my impression though, or you want to have focus on it, then feel free to ignore it! (Also, I understand, the bottle's colour is not so dark in value so it probably would pop out a bit, but wouldn't it be a bit darker? The way it is now it seems a bit glowing to me...maybe I'm all wrong though, because I don't know a lot about lightning or value to be honest orz )