04-06-2014, 06:26 PM
I like both, I think I prefer the one on the right. It has more white space and natural imagery that suggests spirituality without stressing a doctrine. It does draw more attention as well. Can't really suggest anything else wrt to your brief. The fonts and stuff work fine as well. It's clean work. The colours and design on the other one are a bit "muddy" so maybe not as good.
Just because you're doing it for free doesn't mean you can't exercise those juices. Go nuts...play with the theme and the shape of the nookmark and font arrangement, even materials. How about printed transparency strips for example?
http://www.creativebloq.com/graphic-desi...gn-1131695
http://www.trendhunter.com/slideshow/unu...designs#31
Use each project to stretch, it's your perogative really..
Just because you're doing it for free doesn't mean you can't exercise those juices. Go nuts...play with the theme and the shape of the nookmark and font arrangement, even materials. How about printed transparency strips for example?
http://www.creativebloq.com/graphic-desi...gn-1131695
http://www.trendhunter.com/slideshow/unu...designs#31
Use each project to stretch, it's your perogative really..