07-11-2014, 01:30 PM
Nice piece so far!
I would take a look at a few things.
The viewers perspective is looking up at her but her head is painted is if you were viewing her at eye level. Stretch the cloth around her breast to separate them:). The color in the sky is bright yellow above the wings but is dark blue below the wings I would move the yellow of the sky around a bit. I also believe with that much color in the sky the wings would have more reflected light maybe even glow a bit around the edges. Have some fun with it.
I did a quick paint over for you but the anatomy still needs work especially with her head.
Hope some of this helps.
I would take a look at a few things.
The viewers perspective is looking up at her but her head is painted is if you were viewing her at eye level. Stretch the cloth around her breast to separate them:). The color in the sky is bright yellow above the wings but is dark blue below the wings I would move the yellow of the sky around a bit. I also believe with that much color in the sky the wings would have more reflected light maybe even glow a bit around the edges. Have some fun with it.
I did a quick paint over for you but the anatomy still needs work especially with her head.
Hope some of this helps.
Eric
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