02-14-2012, 06:12 PM
Ha! it's an andalite! Man I remember reading the shit out of the Animorphs. Not the greatest sci-fi series looking back at it, but the author sure had a ton of vivid ideas.
A wee suggestion. Maybe have the "main" eyes look back at whatever she is running from? Would maybe give the narrative a stonger sense of urgency or danger, and it would make sense that if you have two sets of eyes you don't have them all look in the same direction while you're in danger.
A wee suggestion. Maybe have the "main" eyes look back at whatever she is running from? Would maybe give the narrative a stonger sense of urgency or danger, and it would make sense that if you have two sets of eyes you don't have them all look in the same direction while you're in danger.