06-29-2015, 06:09 PM
Your life study looks great and your clarity is improving well.
though the Demeter painting needs more clarity anatomy wise, the head seems a bit too far from the rest of the body and the legs a bit thick I would recommend you draw just the anatomy of the figure (a ref wouldn't hurt, it's a tricky angle) on a separate layer to see what ends where and perhaps make the torso in simple planes so you see where the necklace will fall. Lastly this could be a lil iffy because bras and such but one arm is raised while the other is lowered, when arms go up the pectoral stretches which rises and flattens the breast a bit... that's basically the long version of saying the boob feels a lil off.
the other studies you're doing is going well, I can't believe you've done so much! Keep at it, and remember to try to avoid shaky lines!
though the Demeter painting needs more clarity anatomy wise, the head seems a bit too far from the rest of the body and the legs a bit thick I would recommend you draw just the anatomy of the figure (a ref wouldn't hurt, it's a tricky angle) on a separate layer to see what ends where and perhaps make the torso in simple planes so you see where the necklace will fall. Lastly this could be a lil iffy because bras and such but one arm is raised while the other is lowered, when arms go up the pectoral stretches which rises and flattens the breast a bit... that's basically the long version of saying the boob feels a lil off.
the other studies you're doing is going well, I can't believe you've done so much! Keep at it, and remember to try to avoid shaky lines!