03-20-2015, 04:57 PM
Jeso, I don't have too much issues with the pose, though that right arm (our right) looks a bit too large maybe. The vines could maybe be coming at him from more than just in front? So snaking up from the back, from below etc. Maybe the tips could be snaking around his neck and into his mouth! Creep factor upped. Really work the perspective. Watch the background arches as well, not using the same HL at the moment.
Jyonny: I think the shoulders are a bit too wide and affect how the neck connects as well. Remember women are mostly rounded all over and narrower in the shoulders. Accentuating the softness and curves helps things appear feminine so really amp that up. That crossed over leg looks a bit too long or something about how straight it appears.
A client work wip. Not under NDA so I thought I could share it. Any crits welcome, still a bit to go in terms of refining figures etc.
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Jyonny: I think the shoulders are a bit too wide and affect how the neck connects as well. Remember women are mostly rounded all over and narrower in the shoulders. Accentuating the softness and curves helps things appear feminine so really amp that up. That crossed over leg looks a bit too long or something about how straight it appears.
A client work wip. Not under NDA so I thought I could share it. Any crits welcome, still a bit to go in terms of refining figures etc.