04-03-2015, 09:34 AM
Hey guys~ been a while, I injured my hand so no drawing til I get over that. I'm always checking all the cool stuff going on in here though.
Jeso Great painting! I like the lighting on his face and the hair hanging in front. He's some kind of half-human half-demon? Reminds me of some kind of final fantasy character.
You got some perspective issue on his weapon though, the rings going around it make it look bent at the end, and how his hand is holding it, angled away from his body, doesn't match with how it's pointing. I guess you changed the direction of the ellipses below / above the horizon line? They should all be curving in the same direction, just the degree should increase a little as they get higher / further away towards the top of the pole (although probably not too much). I would keep the first set of rings near the blade and adjust the others going up to match, then his hand would look right. Also feels like a little too much contrast, kinda get this 'harsh' feeling on the eyes cause you got from full black to (nearly) full white going on in there.
Great stuff man! Awesome that you can stick with these pieces til the very end.
Jeso Great painting! I like the lighting on his face and the hair hanging in front. He's some kind of half-human half-demon? Reminds me of some kind of final fantasy character.
You got some perspective issue on his weapon though, the rings going around it make it look bent at the end, and how his hand is holding it, angled away from his body, doesn't match with how it's pointing. I guess you changed the direction of the ellipses below / above the horizon line? They should all be curving in the same direction, just the degree should increase a little as they get higher / further away towards the top of the pole (although probably not too much). I would keep the first set of rings near the blade and adjust the others going up to match, then his hand would look right. Also feels like a little too much contrast, kinda get this 'harsh' feeling on the eyes cause you got from full black to (nearly) full white going on in there.
Great stuff man! Awesome that you can stick with these pieces til the very end.