ABANDONED HIDEOUT

[Caisne]

Yo man, sorry it took me forever to do it. Got kinda busy this week. Anyway heres a paintover and few tips for your future stuff.

1. Firs of all the scene looks weird for me. Kinda Slavic villige invaded by aliens? I cant relate to that, thats not something that entertaiment industry feeds us with. Stuff like that makes wiewer fell uncomfortable like "what the fuck is going on" - HARD TO ADAPT
2. Got damn trees. Why the hell are they naked if everything around is green and awesome? Keep them fluid with loose edges, especially if they are framing your scene. hard edged dark brushes onda skylight background makes noise and detail density , which draws the eyes of the wiewver without rewarding it with something cool. make it blurry
3. Place looks deserted, lets bring some more houses flowers and shit. We slavs love that.
4. Horizon tilt is good for action scenes where everything is blurry, guts flying around, explosions etc.
5. Malkway is to straight, it makes sence in live, but in terms of compositions its an arrow that rockets you aut of the frame, and kills space between the planes.
6. Dont paint white dressed chicks on a white background, it doesnt reed.
7. Ad iperfections as i did with fence and the roof of the house. Worls looks more interesting if more variable.
8. lastly the spaceship design looks a little to bizarre for me, to alien.

Hope it'll help ya, man. Keep rocking!