11-29-2018, 12:57 AM
You need some reference for the hands because look, put your hand in a fist, are the knuckles a straight line contour like youve indicated? Same with the other, you have the ring finger bigger than the middle finger, there are lots of attractive charming curves in the palm of the hand, dont draw everything like this like barbie doll super round stuff, more angles
https://www.proko.com/wp-content/uploads...00x338.jpg
http://drawingbooks.org/bridgman2/1.jpg
https://i2.wp.com/uncannycreativity.com/...=434%2C267
Also i really think the crown, necklance, and face are a decent design, but the rest like the stick, its just a plain stick you know, and her shirt, its low cut but thats it, like its just a lowcut shirt like from walmart, and her cloak is just, very symmetrical and not interesting, kinda even looks like its made out of rubber? what is this cloak made of, you know, show that. the background is cool, its alot of design things you need to consider. even the apple you know, design that apple, daniel keyes uses just straights, heavy impact for just a mundane object
https://scottsdaleartschool.org/wp-conte...24x763.jpg
https://www.proko.com/wp-content/uploads...00x338.jpg
http://drawingbooks.org/bridgman2/1.jpg
https://i2.wp.com/uncannycreativity.com/...=434%2C267
Also i really think the crown, necklance, and face are a decent design, but the rest like the stick, its just a plain stick you know, and her shirt, its low cut but thats it, like its just a lowcut shirt like from walmart, and her cloak is just, very symmetrical and not interesting, kinda even looks like its made out of rubber? what is this cloak made of, you know, show that. the background is cool, its alot of design things you need to consider. even the apple you know, design that apple, daniel keyes uses just straights, heavy impact for just a mundane object
https://scottsdaleartschool.org/wp-conte...24x763.jpg
70+Page Koala Sketchbook: http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-3465.html SB
Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
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Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]