11-10-2016, 12:27 PM
Hey Kimonas, love the piece so far.
I wanted to do a quick paintover on it to see if I could enhance it in any way.
I felt the perspective was a little forced on the legs compared to the body. I know the pose in this version is a little more stale but feels more right with the body. If you can make the perspective work with your pose I would definitely go with that one. I Increased the sword size, because I felt the sword was a little small and should be floating a bit more in front of her. I also made the wings mirrored and appear more like they would be flapping.
Nothing major, and not necessarily better or worse, but perhaps it might give you a new perspective on the piece.
I wanted to do a quick paintover on it to see if I could enhance it in any way.
I felt the perspective was a little forced on the legs compared to the body. I know the pose in this version is a little more stale but feels more right with the body. If you can make the perspective work with your pose I would definitely go with that one. I Increased the sword size, because I felt the sword was a little small and should be floating a bit more in front of her. I also made the wings mirrored and appear more like they would be flapping.
Nothing major, and not necessarily better or worse, but perhaps it might give you a new perspective on the piece.