08-18-2014, 07:03 PM
That white cape series looks pretty cool man, love the progression. Still think you're a bit too hasty with some of these shapes though man, just sit and design them for awhile. Remember that Eytan video, except take even longer. Make sure you have all that subtle variation of masses, you seem to spread out a bit to evenly, especially stuff like lighting on trees, so concentrate on clumping up things into larger shapes. If you're going to scribble at least make sure the scribble has a defined shape and gesture you know. Just because its a thumbnail doesn't mean it should be fast or messy.
Still, face temples are super cool. Keep working hard man, its paying off.
Still, face temples are super cool. Keep working hard man, its paying off.