The Book Of Fundamentals

[Amit Dutta]

Hey man, The construction technique looks ok but your proportions are off. The heads are too elongated vertically to begin with if you are going for realistic proportions. If you adjust that, then the eyes should be a little bit less than half way down the total vertical height of the head. Basically squish the whole thing down and move the eyes to the correct position and that is a start.
Accurate proportion and placement is the first thing to nail. Use the reference and copy it identically the first few (hundred) times if you need.