Zesiul

[JonHop]

I don't claim to be an expert but I have the time to give a critique as you asked so here it is.......


The first thing that strikes me on that last piece is the figure is not standing properly, it's as if she's falling to the left. This is due to the legs and feet not being planted on the floor correctly, I think you were trying to give her a look of walking toward us but the way the legs and feet are positioned now she is about to roll her ankle(nasty basketball injury we don't want that lol).

Also the torso is rendered very nicely but the face needs some love, also the horns need a bit of repositioning.

She seems like a demon type creature so having her walking through some type of fire lit place that is dark could work for the background and give you a few more lighting options to play with.

Overall I think you know the main areas you need to work on in the piece but also positioning the figure by re-adjusting the legs and foot placement to give her an equilibrium and ground the figure would help.


Hope that was of some help to you, keep pushing it sir!