Zesiul

[Zesiul]

Hey simon thanks for the crit. About the pose, I wanted to have movement be present. Her swaying almost would help keep the character from being too stiff. I branched out the shoulders, you were dead on with that. I'll probably just do some arm/hand studies just to make sure those are correct. I'll have to go back and measure out the proportions. She's rather short, but her lower half seems shortened due to the above perspective I believe... eh i'll work out a bunch of things and see what I get.

So here is a quick sketch of fixes and changes I've made. I wanted to change the lighting to maybe a moonlit scene. Going back to my original sketch's mood. I'm still messing around with the armor and design. I like the pose a lot more though. Even if it is seemingly similar, look again ;]