08-09-2015, 02:19 AM
Great updates, Tristan! Those studies really look well. Your personal piece has a great feeling to it, and I also like the colour combination (those red clouds seem unusual to me but that's what I really like about it, somehow). Good luck on your Golden Boy Challenge! I'm really curious to see your progress on your topic.
I like the slightly edgy style you have in your head drawings! I just feel that sometimes, the position of one eye is slightly off and they don't align. In the collection the head on the left, for example, I feel that the right eye is a bit too low compared to the other, and in your most recent sketch I feel like the eyes have a position like the head is tilted, but it's not. I'm by no means an expert though, and other than that it's really great stuff!
I like the slightly edgy style you have in your head drawings! I just feel that sometimes, the position of one eye is slightly off and they don't align. In the collection the head on the left, for example, I feel that the right eye is a bit too low compared to the other, and in your most recent sketch I feel like the eyes have a position like the head is tilted, but it's not. I'm by no means an expert though, and other than that it's really great stuff!