03-27-2023, 08:55 AM
Great feedback above.
Regarding the perspective, I see that you updated the architectural element that she's jumping from. Is its left side parallel to the left wall of the building and is the platform horizontal? If yes to both questions, the perspective does not work. The element looks like it has a slanted platform and the decorations on the left are slanted as well. The corner line of the top most corner is slanted too. Maybe if you enlarge your canvas just so you can draw some perspective lines it can help you connect all the elements together?
Regarding the perspective, I see that you updated the architectural element that she's jumping from. Is its left side parallel to the left wall of the building and is the platform horizontal? If yes to both questions, the perspective does not work. The element looks like it has a slanted platform and the decorations on the left are slanted as well. The corner line of the top most corner is slanted too. Maybe if you enlarge your canvas just so you can draw some perspective lines it can help you connect all the elements together?