05-27-2016, 02:32 PM
Welcome to crimson daggers!
Your studies look great so far.
One critique I have is that her pose is really weird. her legs make her not look like she is not lying down. I will admit I am not the best at color theory but I would suggest adding some green and purple to balance out the dominant yellow and red. Her hair is blending into the grass because of the dominant yellow. I also prefer the one where you see the dirt or the cliff. I have no idea what to call it. I feel it gives the image more depth.
If your focal point is the necklace I would highly suggest making it the only thing that is red in order to draw the eye to it. The fly is a little big and her necklace looks like it is levitating. I would have the insect near the necklace. I would suggest doing studies of flies or even create your own creature to steal the necklace . Overall the rendering is good and you effectively apply your studies. Have you done any lighting or color studies? They are tedious but it helps with figuring the hard stuff early on.
I hope that helps. Keep up the good work I can't wait to see more
Your studies look great so far.
One critique I have is that her pose is really weird. her legs make her not look like she is not lying down. I will admit I am not the best at color theory but I would suggest adding some green and purple to balance out the dominant yellow and red. Her hair is blending into the grass because of the dominant yellow. I also prefer the one where you see the dirt or the cliff. I have no idea what to call it. I feel it gives the image more depth.
If your focal point is the necklace I would highly suggest making it the only thing that is red in order to draw the eye to it. The fly is a little big and her necklace looks like it is levitating. I would have the insect near the necklace. I would suggest doing studies of flies or even create your own creature to steal the necklace . Overall the rendering is good and you effectively apply your studies. Have you done any lighting or color studies? They are tedious but it helps with figuring the hard stuff early on.
I hope that helps. Keep up the good work I can't wait to see more