07-12-2016, 07:01 PM
Really interesting piece. Those big battles illustrations are always a challenge no matter what your comfort zone is. I do like that these very vibrant reds and oranges create a really violent mood.
I think.... and that's just a maybe right here but I think a bit of the dynamic is lost because in the third process shot the focus lies on the person lying on the ground and the rest are just shapes around here which creates the sensation of looking at a fallen soldier in the midst of battle.
In your final comp, there seems to be two focus points. One on the person on the ground and then the otherone on the axe whielding guy on the left. And since you're still on progress the main focus point hasn't been established yet so the eye kind of shifts between the two of them which might be a bit confusing.
Anyway this isn't my speciality take my suggestion with a grain of salt.
I think.... and that's just a maybe right here but I think a bit of the dynamic is lost because in the third process shot the focus lies on the person lying on the ground and the rest are just shapes around here which creates the sensation of looking at a fallen soldier in the midst of battle.
In your final comp, there seems to be two focus points. One on the person on the ground and then the otherone on the axe whielding guy on the left. And since you're still on progress the main focus point hasn't been established yet so the eye kind of shifts between the two of them which might be a bit confusing.
Anyway this isn't my speciality take my suggestion with a grain of salt.