06-23-2016, 02:23 PM
Smrr Thanks Smrrr, your comment warms my heart <3
John Thanks dude, I think I haven't put in so much time on a project ever before
Ctrow Thanks man! You should definitely try it. I did start with sketchup but had some problems importing the models into Marmoset (the program that let me warp the camera lens) so used cinema 4d to model it in the end.
Eyli Thanks! I think I will be able to finish it now, was a bit worried at the start of the week.
Another update, working in digital makes me fiddle about so much with so many details I won't even be able to ink they are so small >.< still it makes it easier to arrange each panel with moving stuff.
![[Image: Et0LteC.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/Et0LteC.jpg)
Need some feedback if possible - I am relatively happy with stuff, but the second row (the one with the judge), reading the text in one long line across all the panels feels broken and feels like I miss out the images or go through them too fast to take in what is happening. Considering breaking that line of text up and having small boxes of text in each panel. What do you guys think? Does it work as it is or should I break it up? Any other feedback greatly appreciated too!
EDIT Oh yea, also, the third panel (the one with him smoking), does it feel out of context? Someone suggested I could put some weed symbols to make it clear he's smoking a joint and not a cigarette but idk, I don't want to crowd things out more than they are.
John Thanks dude, I think I haven't put in so much time on a project ever before
Ctrow Thanks man! You should definitely try it. I did start with sketchup but had some problems importing the models into Marmoset (the program that let me warp the camera lens) so used cinema 4d to model it in the end.
Eyli Thanks! I think I will be able to finish it now, was a bit worried at the start of the week.
Another update, working in digital makes me fiddle about so much with so many details I won't even be able to ink they are so small >.< still it makes it easier to arrange each panel with moving stuff.
Need some feedback if possible - I am relatively happy with stuff, but the second row (the one with the judge), reading the text in one long line across all the panels feels broken and feels like I miss out the images or go through them too fast to take in what is happening. Considering breaking that line of text up and having small boxes of text in each panel. What do you guys think? Does it work as it is or should I break it up? Any other feedback greatly appreciated too!
EDIT Oh yea, also, the third panel (the one with him smoking), does it feel out of context? Someone suggested I could put some weed symbols to make it clear he's smoking a joint and not a cigarette but idk, I don't want to crowd things out more than they are.