AfricanVoodoo's Sketchbook

[ThereIsNoJustice]

Hey, AV, a few things are standing out. You are on track studying fundamentals. You have been doing well working on gesture, form, and structure. And it looks like you haven't yet gone much into light, color, and composition, which you could start.

On form and structure, it would help you to clarify the perspective of things if you drew through your forms. If you conceptualize a torso as a cube, draw the hidden back side of the box as well and clarify the tilt. Or if you conceptualize the hips as a cylinder, draw in the full ellipse. Even if the figure is drawn from the front, put in some indication of where the spine is. Once you have a more complete idea of the perspective of a form it becomes easier to see problems, and how to stick anatomy onto the figure matching the perspective.

Some of your figures have extreme perspective applied to them, and it makes them look like skyscrapers, or just very strange. In general, with figures the perspective shouldn't be so extreme unless you are intentionally doing something dramatic with the image. Keep your perspective with figures subtle otherwise.

If you want crit on a certain image just ask.