09-09-2016, 01:37 AM
(09-07-2016, 05:04 PM)John Wrote: I cannot comment about the design, because I have a bad feeling my subjectivity would get in the way of your intent behind the drawing. So I'll try to be as objective as possible.
What's good about this, the anatomical proportions are pretty much there. Minor tweaking might be better. But you should take perspective into account. Speaking of perspective, here's a short list of things you should look out for..
I understand that my redlining looks a bit messy, shoot a reply if I need to be clearer.
That said, hope you take this to the finish and good luck!
Hmmm, you helped me a lot! Thanks so much, i can't sometimes see this things, like if the light is right and perspective. I will work more in this painting and after i will post here. But for hour helped me much, thanks again and your tips are good!