David's Sketchbook ;)

[Fedodika]

ey man that is one pretty photo! Well, i hate to criticize ya all the time but since you left the reference I figured I might as well. Her boobs are too high up, they in your picture are starting at the collar bone, when there is a muscle there called the pectoralis, and the boob attatches to the bottom of the pec, you can see this on really skinny women. The legs in both the thigh area and the calf are too short, like the thigh is almost half as long as it needs to be.

I feel like you use a rigid formula for drawing faces, with like the wide cheekbone, her face, just looks kind of like a mummy or something, like an undead creature lol. I'm not trying to be a dick lol, uuh her hip bone is practically touching her ribcage and her bicep is too short, and she's missing a deltoid muscle. The colors are okay i suppose, but the proportions is something you should pay attention to on this stuff, maybe you did it quite fast, but remember you learn more by getting more correct in a study.

It could be a good challenge to try and get this image to match the photo as close as you can get, even if it takes days or weeks. That would teach you sooooo much stuff about painting that you're not getting it would be insane. I mean like painting every little texture as close as you can get it with every blur and nook and cranny, I'd even help you do it lol. But you know it's all up to you, do what ya feel is right