12-06-2016, 11:56 PM
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This one is really reall good, probably because the proportions and the way you drew the lips, nose without heavy lines, like it looks very soft.
Seems you're working from drawabox, and that is a very good site I wish i had known about starting out, but I'm not sure if it's that old hehe.
The critique I would give you is to focus on proportions, and how the features fit into the head, like the lips. In your latest dude, his nose looks right, but his lips look like a symbol placed on a three dimensional plane. Like, look at your own mouth in the mirror, then slightly part it and turn your head and watch how the lips fit into the face like a U shape, it's really fascinating.
This one is really reall good, probably because the proportions and the way you drew the lips, nose without heavy lines, like it looks very soft.
Seems you're working from drawabox, and that is a very good site I wish i had known about starting out, but I'm not sure if it's that old hehe.
The critique I would give you is to focus on proportions, and how the features fit into the head, like the lips. In your latest dude, his nose looks right, but his lips look like a symbol placed on a three dimensional plane. Like, look at your own mouth in the mirror, then slightly part it and turn your head and watch how the lips fit into the face like a U shape, it's really fascinating.
70+Page Koala Sketchbook: http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-3465.html SB
Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]
Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]