03-07-2018, 10:34 AM
Loving your sketchbook! Really nice style with some neat imaginative stuff. One thing that really stands out to me is to work on your line economy? Right now both your lines and brushstrokes are looking a bit wobbly and uncertain. Try to slow down, reduce your line usage and place as few lines as possible, but as confidently as possible. Hampton has some good exercises on doing this and retaining gesture.
For your anatomy and face painting studies way up further on this page, your edges and painting are looking really nice but the underlying form is suffering. You might want to look at more construction, study the 3D form. Really like your edge use though, that's something that's really standing out.
Hope it helps!
For your anatomy and face painting studies way up further on this page, your edges and painting are looking really nice but the underlying form is suffering. You might want to look at more construction, study the 3D form. Really like your edge use though, that's something that's really standing out.
Hope it helps!