(03-14-2017, 02:23 PM)AlexShi Wrote: Hi!
You're doing good, keep it up! I would pay extra attention to the shadows, they seem to be missing in your sketches. Also, I'm not sure which program you are using but if Photoshop then do take advantage of the layers and the lasso tool for better control of your shapes. Start from big shapes and then gradually go into detail, that way you will save time and avoid making a mess ;).
thanks for taking the time to respond! :) i'm working in sai! do you mean blocking in shapes and shadows with the lasso tool? that sounds like an interesting approach. i'm just terrible at lighting and shadows, so for now i'm just trying to see colors and values better, but i'll try my best...!