06-28-2018, 04:33 AM
i like the concept, just the proportions are throwin it off my dude, the hand i mean i get it youre going for a foreshortened thing but its just soo huge it looks kinda weird. the lower body is missing a huge chunk of like the sacrum and hip bone. The glutes are tiny even for a female figure, the lighting on the arm is confusing because it is in straight profile but then comes out at the viewer yet is lit the same way as if its not turning in space. non existent neck, the feet are strangely diff sizes; cmon man slow down and draw some fundies for a while, it'll help so much :D
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Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]