07-27-2017, 11:52 PM
Things id personally change are
the elephant peeping through the tucks is a bit weird
not feeling the green outline round the middle elephant
they all look like theyre coming towards the viewer but the front one seems to be coming from the water
and he looks like hes bigger but standing at the same distance as the 2nd elephant
i do like
the overall feel of the piece
the fact the rider is not immediately attention grabbing
most of the line work besides the 1st elephants ear which has a randomness not evident anywhere else in the piece.
overall composition i like
well done, please dont take anything to harsh, just my honest impressions
the elephant peeping through the tucks is a bit weird
not feeling the green outline round the middle elephant
they all look like theyre coming towards the viewer but the front one seems to be coming from the water
and he looks like hes bigger but standing at the same distance as the 2nd elephant
i do like
the overall feel of the piece
the fact the rider is not immediately attention grabbing
most of the line work besides the 1st elephants ear which has a randomness not evident anywhere else in the piece.
overall composition i like
well done, please dont take anything to harsh, just my honest impressions