Narog's sketchbook

[Narog]

Cool mage exploration designs, Narog. They look very unique from one and other and so far read well. It will be cool to see them pushed further :)

The anatomy has issues, however. Compared to the rest of the body, the legs are tiny and short, same with the feet. In turn this makes the arms look much longer than they should.

A nit-picky thing as well - even though this is just a sketchbook to fill how you want - it would be good to see a more refined presentation of your work. You have a lot of good pieces, but most of them suffer from the clutter of sketches around them or being on a canvas that feels claustrophobic and too small. The first guy in the mage concepts isn't even coloured all the way. Again, it's just a small thing, but always thinking about presentation helps in the long run.

Regardless, keep up the good work n____n

Hey chubby_cat !

You're right I didn't account for armor thickness on those mages legs for example, pretty basic mistake on my part. I was happy to find a nice standing model on the interwebs and just jumped right on it without much thought ;)

Regarding the sketches presentation I realize i keep it kinda dirty and you're right I should atleast occassionally post something that reads better. My initial though behind a sketchbook was not to present my refined pieces but rather loose sketches, embarrassing mistakes, unfinished stuff. Experienced folk (like you!) are always able to see past the dirtiness and find flaw that I could not see which is why I really like this forum :).

You know writing thoughts like this is a nice practice in itself - helps evaluate previous thoughts :D. 

I also just made a presentation robot in a fibonacci spiral, may it serve me well in the future !