Zodd Sketchbook

[Zodd]

Not feeling the flow of this piece those pillar lead the eye out of the composition in my opinion.There a thing that also bother me with the creature hand being hidden behind the arm it can be confusing to the viewer.One other thing is how you also have hide the other wing once again creating confusion.If you know anything about wing you know that those wing don't enable flight.That tell also is oddly cylindrical where in should be merging with the rest of the body.


Other then that it a challenge to show an aerial combat from a top down view and i think you did pretty well on that point.

Thank you very much Dark! There's just one wing, he can fly because he's a magic beast, the hunter isnt magical, tha'ts why he's jumping. I've tried to make some soft edges and gradient on the pillar, but i think that didnt worked xD