Razor's 2019 Sketchbook

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Create interest in your shape use 1 small 1 medium 1 large shape to create a shape

Also i would suggest pushing the scene back and to add some really nearly visible mountain in the distance to add even more scale cue.For the mood depending on the feeling you want either mystery or adventure that the 2 primary feeling i get when watching both picture.Also is the tower rectangular or cylindrical?

Thanks darktiste for the feedback
Yes was playing with a few different shapes for that middle ground area was also trying to avoid tamgents but yes will probably change that area....

atm to many blank spaces, I might put some more rocky outcrops back further as you suggested..

but my feel for the peice was that it was supposed to be some deep dark cavern like LotRs Moria the character is a wizard type dwarf lol and the tower was originally supposed to be a menhir type rock but change it because I wanted a yellow /orange light to break up the blue.... Atm its just a rock outcrop tower