Razor's 2019 Sketchbook

[Fedodika]

so for this one,

http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/attachme...205554.jpg

I feel the arm is a little short, and the edges are good in some places like the upper back, but once you get to the sacrum area, they get smudgy but really, i did a figure drawing a few months back with the same issue and almost sold the thing so its not a big deal :D

Her cranium could also be taller, really get the roundness and fullness of that hair.

http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/attachme...205629.jpg

This one her butt, it just... it makes me sad, like the shadow from her crack looks kinda muddy and the way the leg on the left side of the page goes in is very sharp, but i understand its going forward and its being obscured in the value, id try to seperate that form, since the gesture doesnt follow the contour of the left side. Her head is kinda cone shaped. with women always go for more round, more volume in hair.

http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/attachme...205705.jpg

With this the scalpula, i dont think the hard edge would have a line that hard to seperate it near the rhomboid, only thing is just be more careful with those buttcracks, be delicate, butt cracks are beautiful subtle things, they love you :D