seeking critiques for figure drawing (nudity)

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The only thing i notice right away is the man under the waterfall sketch is lower leg is super thin and leak any kind of knee indication.Also you made is pelvis or i will refer to it as is underwear inaccurate.I think the arm that face us is probably where you had the most trouble.

To learn to draw figure that twist you need to know the landmark of the body and you need to be able to draw the body as if it was made of glass.I propose to start with primitive cylinder box egg sphere and you increase the difficulty to meet with your current skill adding primitive or removing from those primitive.It also important to learn the motion range of the limb and to know where muscle insert and how they look when the bend contract or twist.

If i know a master of drawing through it glen vilppu

Hmm, now that you mention it I can see where I got wrong with the waterfall sketch. I'm guessing the proportions and the placements of the landmarks are off by quite a bit. I will try to make a fix of those and try to get something more accurate. 

Also, when you meant by the primitive forms do you mean studying only the primitive forms interlocking with one another to practice? or that together in conjunction with implementing them into the figures? I know the Hampton method works similarly with Glenn's in that they both try to reconstruct the figure from basic primitive forms. 

Anyhow, thank you for the advice! I'll try to implement that more when I'm doing my next batch of figures.