drifter93's sketchbook

[drifter93]

Here how i would probably have done it.

So basically here a few key thing i done

Played with level to adjust the option to adjust the value

Played with light and shadow option to adjust the value

Here a few observation either you were working on dark model or the light was minimal or you didn't follow the right value but since you didn't bother showing the reference i could not determine.

Try to understand human skin as as a really soft feeling with soft transition except sometime where there overlapping element or bone showing up.

I recommend working on a grey background to avoid your dark being to dark.

I didn't touch the head or feet since i had no reference to work those area. since they overlap.

Sorry forgot to post the reference, it's from this video, the last 5 minute pose: https://vimeo.com/370433464