05-03-2020, 04:20 AM
Hey there, really like your art! First thing that comes to mind when I see the clean/final concepts is that you put in a lot of thought into them!
If you want some feedback from me, I think that the composition on the restaurant and Sr. Vete is a bit confusing. The amount of detail on Sr. Vete draws my eye to the icecream balls on their body equally, and it feels like there is no central focus I should pay attention to? Similarly for the restaurant: it is overall fairly clean, but the rock texture around the building may be visually "too heavy" and draws attention away from the overall concept.
If you want some feedback from me, I think that the composition on the restaurant and Sr. Vete is a bit confusing. The amount of detail on Sr. Vete draws my eye to the icecream balls on their body equally, and it feels like there is no central focus I should pay attention to? Similarly for the restaurant: it is overall fairly clean, but the rock texture around the building may be visually "too heavy" and draws attention away from the overall concept.