Sean's sketchook

[sgavrilles]

Critiquing stylized work is difficult for multiple reasons, but I can give you my first impression.

The only thing that jumped out at me as needing improvement, design-wise, is the snake warrior image. I think he'd look better with longer legs, since he looks to be a fast and agile type. A good rule of thumb for leg length is that it should at least be equivalent to the length from the pubic symphysis to the top of the head (stylistic choices excepted, of course), and his is a bit less than that.

Overall, though, I think your stuff makes a good impression. Keep it up!

Thanks man, ill keep an eye out on my anatomy.   I usually like to have reference but for that one i didn't so its showing through haha.  I just got a physical copy of bridgmans anatomy so ill start digging into that again.

Thanks for the advice!