07-11-2021, 05:49 AM
Heya. You have some nice studies in here, and some cool design work. Can I ask what direction you are wanting to head into in the future? You mentioned having maybe wanted to work in the "industry" in one post?
Have you finished much personal work? I wouldn't really want to comment on technical things with you without seeing your best work first, as it seems like you have some good observational skill, but I'm not sure you've pushed your work to a final enough?
The few illustrations you've posted as finals appear as if they lack a few more passes of refinement mostly in terms of form read and really refining edge balance. You do seem to use a lot of hard edges to cut silhouettes out, which ends up flattening your forms, so you could think about refining your edge work. I think you could probably benefit from pushing a future study or two much much further than you currently are just to exercise those finishing muscles. Then take that onto your own final illustrations.
Have you finished much personal work? I wouldn't really want to comment on technical things with you without seeing your best work first, as it seems like you have some good observational skill, but I'm not sure you've pushed your work to a final enough?
The few illustrations you've posted as finals appear as if they lack a few more passes of refinement mostly in terms of form read and really refining edge balance. You do seem to use a lot of hard edges to cut silhouettes out, which ends up flattening your forms, so you could think about refining your edge work. I think you could probably benefit from pushing a future study or two much much further than you currently are just to exercise those finishing muscles. Then take that onto your own final illustrations.