01-09-2022, 04:07 AM
I love seeing the progress you've made on your pieces over the past year or two. I think color sense has definitely leveled up quite a lot is my first takeaway, and your figures and heads are drawn better also! Really liking how you are going after the multi-figure compositions, those are tough to pull off, but I think you're doing it really well so far.
My main critiques would be that a lot of your edges seem to be hard around the edges of figures and such, I think if you focus on softening edges away from the focal area that could help things blend together into the image better (I would suggest doing some master studies after someone like Velasquez, Rembrandt, Caravaggio, etc. and see how they lose edges in multi-figure compositions).
I think one other area you could improve upon is the stiffness of certain poses. A lot of your figures are very stoic and straight up and down (which I think works in some images, but in others I think they could be more dynamic). I would say doing more gesture drawing and maybe even looking up videos on how character designers do exaggerated poses would benefit your images.
Keep up the awesome work, the improvement is clear!
My main critiques would be that a lot of your edges seem to be hard around the edges of figures and such, I think if you focus on softening edges away from the focal area that could help things blend together into the image better (I would suggest doing some master studies after someone like Velasquez, Rembrandt, Caravaggio, etc. and see how they lose edges in multi-figure compositions).
I think one other area you could improve upon is the stiffness of certain poses. A lot of your figures are very stoic and straight up and down (which I think works in some images, but in others I think they could be more dynamic). I would say doing more gesture drawing and maybe even looking up videos on how character designers do exaggerated poses would benefit your images.
Keep up the awesome work, the improvement is clear!